Blog Comments – Up or down?

I this is my ranking of how well I think these students wrote their posts from excellent to worst:

1. Number 3 – Because it comments on the person receiving the comments’ thoughts as-well. It also explains what is happening now and what she will do in the future (passing on information). It ends with a question which is really helpful and a good kick-start when someone wants to reply.
2. Number 5 – It has great punctuation and grammar and states his ideas very nicely.
3. Number 2 – Has excellent grammar, punctuation and spelling. Usually you would end with “kind regards” or “sincerely”. It is relevant to the subject and isn’t too long and boring.
4. Number 8 – When you start an email or comment, I don’t think you should immediately criticise (this one doesn’t overly criticise)  the others’ work because that might influence the way you share your ideas on the comment. For instance, the reader may think that you are being unkind and may not listen to your positive advice.
5. Number 1 – This is a very bad example of a comment because firstly, they are talking to a teacher. They use slang language and is very hard to understand. I don’t understand the topic of the email. In addition, the spelling is also incorrect.
6. Number 4 – This comment doesn’t even start with a greeting. It is very unhelpful in the way that the spelling is incorrect and crams her ideas into sentences.
7. Number 7 – It doesn’t have any feedback or any advice to the reader. It is hard to understand which part of the story was more appealing than other. It doesn’t start with any greeting, but otherwise the spelling was good.
8. Number 6 – It starts off with an okay greeting. Later on, I think it is wrong to talk rudely or inappropriately about others through a comment. They used slang and bad punctuation.